Week 6.1

Today's class was a good opportunity to gain some final feedback before hand in. Most of the comments I received from Matt were about refining my type, so I'm going to work hard to achieve that before hand in on Thursday. 


The feedback for the illustrative poster was to question if the coffee cup was necessary and whether or not i could extend the type down the left hand column.

For the photographic poster it was repositioning the rectangle so as to not interfere too much with the image and revise the type in the bottom centre.

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